Talk for Writing:学写作,真的要等到识字之后吗
The Chinese route to writing is fixed: phonics, then characters, then sentences, then model essays, and only then your own words. A child waits until they have enough characters to deserve to say anything. Dr Zhihao Yan sets that against two classrooms. In Dr Xiaoyun Peng's writing class the starting question is philosophical — who are you, and how do you introduce yourself? — and children who can speak but not yet write take names apart and chain them into a story. In a Year 1 literacy lesson in an English state primary, after The Tiger Who Came to Tea, nobody is asked to write a response: they pick four picture cards and retell the story by ordering them. Migrant children with English as a second language, local children just starting phonics, and a child who will not speak all "wrote". He ends on the difference in marking — a teacher who writes "ran 😊" beside runned and then praises the reasoning.
中考作文“高考化”,值得点赞,但还可以更好
Shanghai's 2024 zhongkao asked fifteen-year-olds to write on "I too am a water-drawer", against a prompt comparing the world to a formless pool. Dr Zhihao Yan reads this as real progress: it is harder to pre-package than the narrative titles of the previous decade, and it rewards handling an abstraction. He then names its limit. The prompt fixes the metaphor — why must the world be water rather than a mountain, a fire or an atom, and why must growing up be drawing water rather than digging or climbing? His larger argument is about what the exam teaches teachers to teach. Because high-scoring zhongkao essays reward emotive narrative and ornamental phrasing rather than argument, classroom writing has drifted that way too — leaving pupils underprepared for the reasoning demanded at gaokao, at A-level and in any university.